The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular；
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …；
Advancement 替换 development；
Pour into （ flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into；
Current （ currently )替换 now；
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.；
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people；
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的。 （it goes without exaggeration that更好)
For a start， we can， freely， search desired information at any moment . Little by little， our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge recreations online by chatting， playing games， or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with；
We can， freely， search 用了插入语的写作手法；
our knowledge will be well enriched www.med126.com， and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动；
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides；
Deliver 替换 send.
There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings， in a way， especially the growing violence ，***， porn pictures， AV-films emerging on the screen ， which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings， 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型；其次however作为插入语；再次，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to.
Emerging 替换 appearing （ fading 替换 disappearing )；
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词。（直接用 netizen更好)
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives， despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ，therefore， take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides；
Computers do play ，使用do 表示强调；
Positive 替换 important / good 等；
A slice of 替换 a part of；
Unfavorable 替换 bad；
Impacts 替换 effects / influences；
We should， therefore， take advantage of … 使用插入语；
Fruits （而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage （ defects 替换 disadvantage ) ；
Facet 替换 aspect.
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