分享医学职称论文英文摘要的写作方法
如何写好医学职称论文的英文摘要参考如下:
一、标题
(一)要求
1.简明扼要(short and concise)
(1)尽量控制在一行,但不是一个句子
(2)不超过25个单词或120-140个字母
(3)除DNA、RNA、CT等不用缩写
2.信息丰富(informative)
3.便于索引(indexing)
4.较长标题可采用副标题
(二)标题写作中常用词组和表达方式
1.用…(方法/手段)对…进行研究/分析/观察/评价:
Study(analysis/observation/evaluation/assessment) of (on) … (by) using 方法/with工具)
2.A对B的作用
Effort of A on B
Protective effect of omeprazole on endothelin-induced gastric mucosal injury
3.A与B的关系-医 学全,在线.搜集.整理www.med126.com
Correlation (relation/relationship) between A and B
Correlation of A with B and C
常用修饰词:positively/negatively/significantly/insignificantly
标题写作中常用词组和表达方式
4.用…治疗…
Use of …in the treatment of …(病)in …(生物)
Use of omeprazole in the treatment of gastric ulcer in the elderly
5.A是B
A as B
二、著录部分书写
(一)姓名
标准式:WANG Luowei,HUANG Yingfeng,GUO Xiao’an
(二) 地址
800 Xiang Yin Road, Shanghai 200433, P.R.China
(三)资助
A project funded by the National “863” Program
三、摘要的分类与格式
摘要是作者要给读者的精华,分两大类:
(一)指示性摘要
(二)资料性摘要
1.非结构式摘要
缺点:段落不明,给编辑、审稿、阅读和计算机处理带来诸多不便
2.全结构式摘要(8要素摘要)
(1)目的
(2)设计
(3)地点
(4)对象
(5)处理
(6)主要测定项目
(7)结果
(8)结论
全结构式摘要的优点
(1)观点更明确
(2)信息量更大
(3)差错更少
(4)符合计算机数据库建立和使用的要求
全结构式摘要的缺点:烦琐、重复、篇幅过长
3.半结构式摘要(四要素摘要)
(1)目的(objective/purpose/aim)
(2)方法(methods)
(3)结果(results)
(4)结论(conclusion)
目的-医学全在线,搜集整,理www.med126.com
是主题,是作者相要介绍的关键问题
一、目的格式
(一)单表目的
(二)背景+目的
二、目的常用时态
(一)背景:现在时(一般现在时、完成时和进行时)
(二)目的:一般现在时/现在完成时,或一般过去时
三、介绍目的常用句型
主要用动词不定式to表达
1.直接用to do短语表达
举例:To determine if use of omeprazole protects against the gastric mucosal injury
2.The purpose/aim/objective/goal(of present study is)was to
举例:The aim of this study was to determine the protective function of omeprazole on gastric mucosal injury3.The present study is /was designed/devised/intended to
举例:The present study was designed to establish whether there might be a genetic predisposition to an altered pattern of anti-inflammatory cytokine produced in patients with irritable bowel syndrome
4.This study was performed/conducted/carried out/undertaken to
举例:An experimental study was conducted using a canine mode to elucidate …5.We aimed/sought to/attempted to
举例:We sought to assess whether there is an increased risk of tuberculosis among individuals who work in certain industries occupations.
四、介绍目的常用动词
1.研究:study, investigate, examine, observe, explore
举例:Our objective in this report is to examine the clinical feature, pathology and treatment for patients with pancreatic cancer.
2.评价:evaluate, validate
举例:To evaluate sonography as a tool for initial diagnosis in emergency room patients with abdominal trauma.
3.确定:determine, decide, confirm, support, define, characterize
4.证实:prove, demonstrate, document, test, support, testify, verify
5.阐明、搞清:explain, elucidate, clarify, illustrate, delineate, find out, contribute to the knowledge of
6.介绍:describe, present, report
7.建立:establish, develop, set out
8.寻找:search for, look for, seek, find
9.识别、区分:identify, differentiate, discriminate
10.优选:optimize
11.比较:compare
12.回顾:review
13.相关:correlate A with B
方法部分
(1)研究设计-医学全在线,搜集整,理www.med126.com
(2)研究对象的特性
(3)干预或处理方法
(4)测定或观察方法
一、 研究对象的选择、来源及标准
1.纳入研究:were entered into/enrolled in/selected (randomly)
举例:A total of 169 patients were included in the study, 83 of whom received……
2.排除或退出研究:were excluded from participation,withdrew from the study due to/because to
举例:……Patients with significant aortic valvular diseases were excluded.
二、 研究对象的分组
1.……were divided into/classified/grouped into
2.……were divided randomly/randomized into
3.…… were divided equally into
举例:Patients were divided into three groups: Group 1…… Patients (n = 539) with a history of duodenal ulcer and a positive H. pylori screening test result were randomized into 4 groups. OAC group received 20 mg omeprazole, ……
三、 年龄
1.某一年龄
举例:A 50-year-old patient. Patients (age 26±3 years).
2.在某年龄范围内及平均年龄
举例:Patients range in age from …to…, with a mean of (50 years)
3.在某一年龄以上或以下
举例:Patients more than 50 years. Patients under/less than 50 years.
四、 性别、时间
1.性别
twelve patients (7 male and 5 female )
The male-to-female ratio was 1:4
2.时间
Body weight was measured weekly, and liver biopsy was obtained at 4, 8 and 12 weeks. ……
五、 诊断与治疗
1.诊断
be diagnosed as having …
be diagnosed as …by …/with …?be suspected as …
2.治疗
be treated with…(alone or in combination with …)
be treated on outpatient/inpatient basis
举例:
(1)Patients (n = 539) with a history of duodenal ulcer and a positive H. pylori screening test result were randomized into 4 groups. OAC group received 20 mg omeprazole,…
(2)50 patients with active bleeding duodenal ulcer were randomly assigned to receive one of the four treatment regimens. …
结果部分
1.是文章结论的根据
2.应记录真实的科研数据
3.除指示性说明外,一般用过去时表示
一、 常用句型
1.结果表明:The results showed / demonstrated / revealed / documented / indicated/suggested…that…?It was found that…
举例:The results showed that high thigh cuff Doppler technique was 79 percent sensitive, 56 percent specific and 63 percent accurate.
2.与…有关:A was related / correlated /associated with B. There was a relationship /correlation between A and B. There was a relation of A with B and C
举例:Insulin sensitivity index was negatively with blood velocity (r=0.530, P<0.05), body mass index (r=o.563, P<0.01) and baseline insulinemia (r=0.489, P<0.05)
3.增加或减少
(1)表示数值增加的动词:increase, rise, elevate
(2)表示数值增加的名词:increase, increment, elevation
(3)表示数值减少的动词:decrease, reduce, fall, drop, decline, lower
(4)表示数值减少的名词:decrease, decrement, reduction, fall, drop, decline, lowering
(5)从…增加到…,平均增加…:increase from …to …, with a mean/average (increase) of …
(6)从…增加到…,总的增加…:increase from …to …, with an overall increase of …
(7)增加了10%:increase by (10%)
4.倍数比较
(1)增加或减少3倍:increase by 3 fold (times). a 3-fold increase
(2)A 是 B的3倍:A is 3 fold (times) as…as B. A is 3 fold (times) B
5.结果的统计学意义
(1)明显不同(significant difference)
(2)很明显不同(very/highly significant difference)
(3)区别不明显( insignificant difference)
(4)无区别( nonsignificant difference/no difference)
6.统计学意义常用句型
(1)There was/is significant difference in…between A and B
(2)The difference in …between A and B was/is significant
(3)A was/is significant difference from B in …
(4)No significant difference was found / observed / noted in …between A and B
“in” 表示区分的性质或内容
举例:
(1)There were no significant difference between treatment groups in symptoms and lung function (P>0.05).
(2)Significant difference were not noted in the level of HDL cholesterol, and LDL peak particle diameter before and after treatment.
结论部分-医学全在线,搜集整,理www.med126.com
是作者发表观点和见解,给读者的精髓部分
1.归纳性说明研究结果或发现
2.结论性说明结果的可能原因、机理或意义
3.前瞻性说明未解决的问题
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